When I looked out of my window,
I saw an amazing sight !
Roads and houses disappeared,
There was a bright light !
Our house was in a wood,
I was pretty surprised !
I heard some new sounds,
I listed as many as I could write.
The roaring of the tiger,
The hissing of the snake.
The splashing of a fish,
Swimming in a lake
The growling of a bear,
The clucking of a hen.
The snoring of a lion,
Sleeping in his den.
Then I heard a different sound telling me to wake up,
It was my mom telling me to get ready for school,
The sounds I heard were in my dream ,
They were so very cool !
I saw an amazing sight !
Roads and houses disappeared,
There was a bright light !
Our house was in a wood,
I was pretty surprised !
I heard some new sounds,
I listed as many as I could write.
The roaring of the tiger,
The hissing of the snake.
The splashing of a fish,
Swimming in a lake
The growling of a bear,
The clucking of a hen.
The snoring of a lion,
Sleeping in his den.
Then I heard a different sound telling me to wake up,
It was my mom telling me to get ready for school,
The sounds I heard were in my dream ,
They were so very cool !
Absolutely love it Keya. Super creative and so genuine... Just like dreams so many of us really have.
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Keya,it's lovely.How beautifully you have put into words a sweet dream.Loved every line.....so proud of you beta.
ReplyDeleteSo spontaneous and refreshing. And straight from the heart. That's what poetry is all about.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shanta.
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ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem Keya! Well done! Keep it up! Poonam Chadha
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DeleteLovely Keys. Beautifully written. Wonderful and intelligent rhyming. Keep going!
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