He lived in a hole
His name was Loris
His hole was in a forest
He ate sweets day and night
For his sweets he would give up a fight
He loved sweets so much
He ate them for breakfast , dinner and lunch
Once one of his teeth fell out
He began to howl and cry aloud
His friends came scurrying out in a hurry
To check out what was his worry
When his friends saw what had happened
You should have been more careful said the captain
For a month you shall not have any sweet
And don't you dare to cheat
But of-course Loris did not listen
He could not resist and had treats from the kitchen
Soon there were no teeth left with poor Loris
And he was now the only creature with no teeth in the forest
MORAL OF THE POEM-Don't eat too many sweets!!!!!!!
Keya, poor Loris__with no teeth! Lovely poem! Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you dadi
DeleteKeya loved your simple sweet poem.Enjoyed reading it very very much.Found the name Loris also very sweet.God bless!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Keya
ReplyDeleteA sweet poem from our poetry star
ReplyDeleteFor this she deserves a chocolate bar
Its yummy to enjoy cakes and slush
but after always remember to brush
Its not wise to take things too far
For Loris is lucky its teeth would regrow
But till that time its face it can't show
For us it would have been a real tragedy
So cleaning our teeth is a good strategy
With healthy teeth our face would glow